The dusk devours the sun, I ponder
how will I forget you?
if I can see the heavy droplets of rain
that you blotted on my neck
when I look at the strewed clouds with tinges of red
I can sense the impending storm
my veins are absorbing, as they turn purple
you took pleasure in the overtone of my affliction
how will I forget it?
when every time downpour occurs
I see my flesh on dreary skies,
tornadoes in my tummy
and every time I hear your name
I become a hurricane
Nice post
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Thank you☺
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Welcome
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I am in a literal blaze of doom Eli. I admire this 😄😊
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Hi, thank you!! 💖
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Oh my god, this is utterly beautiful, and the image you chose just heightens the entire mood of the poem. I loved this.
Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, adaria. I’m glad you liked it💖💖💖
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I liked this poem. Hurricanes can be dangerous. A amazing poem.
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Thank you💖
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You are welcome Eli.
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Hey! I just wanted you to know that I love your content, so I nominated you for the Liebster Award! Check out my post at https://amandahazard.com/2017/12/24/the-liebster-award/ to find out more about it.
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Hi, thank you 💖
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elegant and powerful and real. this is great
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Thank you, Lou 💖 x
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In love with this. Wow.
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Thank you so much for your kind words, love 💖💖💖
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Lovely written piece🙂
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Thank you 💖
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Tornados and rain. You work with bad weather mostly. Nice read! May he meet you soon!
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Thank you 💖 But I don’t wanna meet him anymore 😂
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Oh why? May whatever is best for you happens in your life. May you get perfect enlightenment and grace. 🙂
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I really appreciate your kind words, very warm support and wishes. I thank you, wholeheartedly 💖 I hope for the same great things to happen to you, too 🌻
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You’re kind and sweet. May all horrors inside you be gone forever now! Love and light!
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You are too, Anand. I couldn’t thank you nearly enough. 💖💖💖 That’s so nice, though I also need darkness to witness the beauty of light, stars, and moon✨🌛
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Oh you’re wise as well. Now it’s been long since I made heart symbol here. ❤ ❤ ❤ Love and light to you and yours. Stay blessed!
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