Yesterday, burglars attacked me
snuck in through my navel
slithered through the gaps under the door of my mind
tromped over and intruded my body
a heist of calm state and innocence
captured my breath, tamed my soul
ruptured my walls and windows,
cracks turned into sinkholes
aggressively pulling out my innards
my hefty veins
intermittently becoming violet and blue and violent
my heart was in a drag race,
in synch with my fingers
trembling of turbulence
but my brain is out of place
creeping in a fast-paced city
and I hear the world blowing their horns at me
when I’m at a march towards an imminent doom
deliverance comes in tiptoe
growing frail,
I gave birth to torment and fright
expelled the daze, exhaled the haze
my soul escaped, my breath smothered them
tomorrow is never an assurance
but I made it today
That’s one heavy pain you felt.
Loved the description of darkness and burglars attacking!
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Heavy but still surviving, thank yoouuu, means a lot💖💖💖
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You are a fighter!
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I guess we all are💖💖💖
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Interesting way of stringing words together! This was a very good read. Thank you.
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No, thank you for taking the time to read it. 💖💖💖
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especially wonderful imagery in the first section ending with violent, and in the last section, beginning with “I gave birth”…this poem gave me goosebumps (and for me that’s a sure mark of honesty in writing). thank you for this.
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Thank you for always appreciating my work, really means a lot to me💖💖💖
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Love that…
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Thank you💖
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Salacious
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Though it wasn’t supposed to be haha thank you for reading 💖💖
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But I made it today.
Wow. You are so amazing.
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And so are you. Thank you 💖💖💖
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❤️❤️
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I would be honest: this piece stands out from all others on this blog and I’ve read almost all by now. And I feel I know why. This isn’t about your love and this is also not about introspection or nature of reality as you perceive it. I feel it’s about some ‘trivialities’ some technical ‘nuances’ and unforeseen circumstances such as hackers and burglars. But I feel there was no cause for alarm as you know by now. You’re safe and your love is still flourishing through your poems! Enjoyed reading it. Much love ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you 💖
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Amazingly written! The personification is unparalleled.
Guard yourself, arm your body
Prepare yourself
For those beings spreading emotions so gory
They’ll come again, and again
Know your weakness, and drive you insane
But you must face, with an unwavering grace
Their dark evil blows
With your own powerful vows
I believe in you, believe in you
A mind so powerful
To bear such torments
Needs an awakening
From its long state of dormant
You have the strength, nature’s daughter
Let it flow through you, the universe shall empower
Marry the warrior of light
Let him fill you with knowledge unknown in sight
Birth a shining future for yourself
Worry not, for those who fight against the dark
Shall grow into an inferno
From their once whimpering spark
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My heart 💘
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Yeah how about we not put an arrow in it?😂😂😅 Just…keep it shining maybe!😄
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What’s wrong with the arrow? 😂
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Our hearts have enough holes as it is pumping blood (and emotions) through us, giving the poor thing another hole ain’t fair no?😅😄
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It won’t have another hole if you won’t pull out the arrow.
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You won’t have to pull out the arrow if its not there inside the heart!😂
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And if there’s no heart inside hahaha 😜😂
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Keep it up girl! I wish you the best in your journey, and that may you find your light asap! (Or maybe become light yourself!😮)
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I wish you the same and even more, Lloyd! I mean, Wolf! 🐺 We could be both our own light and darkness. Cheers✨🌈💖
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Seriously my name isn’t Lloyd, it was a typo, good lord! Yeahup we could, but be the light that your darkness protects, not devours!😉😄
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Lloyd is fine. 😂😂😂 My light and my darkness are interchangeable. 🌈
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*repeatedly hits head on a coconut tree*
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Oh, poor coconut tree.
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Riiiight, cause this head is made of steel
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And so is my heart 🐺
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Just wonderful.
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Thank you so much dear ❤🌷🌻💖
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This is the kind of poem that makes me love poetry. It is what brings me to my knees and makes me want to be a better writer. It is perfect.
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That’s overwhelming.. thank you!! 💖🌻
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It took my breath away!!!!
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